what a sophisticated exercise with PERSPECTIVE and METAPHOR. Students, read this and think about the marriages you've witnessed in your lives. ALSO, ALSO (!) after your initial reading, try reading it left to right. Read it aloud and with a friend. It sounds so cool. A little eerie, actually. Amazing, Gaby Wackford. Amazing.
I LOVE this, Gaby! The juxtaposition of the two types of adornment really made me consider how fortunate many of our young women are compared to others in other times and locations. Awesome!!
This is very good. I think that you have a lot of talent. Keep going in your writing is amazing.
Tulle fabric gives the scale a little magical and dreamy at the skirt. Sexy and cute, the bride should not cry in front of the cameras!